This was a really good pitch. I wasn't overly impressed with your trailer, but definitely feel like you guys are a solid team with a clear vision. I want to know more about the next part of the story that was alluded to in you overview but I think was poorly played out in the trailer. I would suggest making sure that if given the opportunity to shoot potential scenes, you include more of that story.
Nicholas S. Posted 7 months ago
Solid pitch guys.
Donald Y. Posted 7 months ago
Sincere group. They (you) look like filmmakers.
Chado M. Posted 7 months ago
Nice pitch - can tell you guys truly believe in the project. Kudos for timmies n beer :D
Sandra M. Posted 7 months ago
Good Luck.
Colin T. Posted 7 months ago
interesting concept, and nice pitch video
Jessica D. Posted 7 months ago
I appreciate that you touch on the subject matter of the film and that while it may appear to be something we've all seen before, it actually has a lot more to offer.
DL M. Posted 7 months ago
Show us more!
Aiden C. Posted 7 months ago
Well done on the pitch. The trailer however did not show anything I have not seen before many times.
Richard D. Posted 7 months ago
I have re-watched the trailer for the project and am wondering if it wouldn't create more suspense to have smaller snippets of film, with a foreboding score and narrative voice over building up to the plot components you cannot share, with minimal to no dialogue. This premise has worked for many great films and TV shows. The recent A&E promos for Bates Motel used only photo stills and yet it still made me want to watch.
Richard D. Posted 7 months ago
I think in reading some of the comments below, that you may need a stronger build up to promote the project. Its not enough to say that the film will blow our minds - we have to believe it will. M. Night Shyamalan does a great job building this type of anticipation in the trailers for his films - although he rarely delivers the same impact - but the point is we think he will so we go to the movie. You need that kind of momentum.
Richard D. Posted 7 months ago
Excellent concept - best of luck
Alysa K. Posted 7 months ago
Lookin good guys!
Troy H. Posted 7 months ago
good pitch good luck guys
Chris C. Posted 7 months ago
I like the honesty I see here in the pitch, but I don't feel myself moved. As you said, the story seems too predictable and without being able to shake that feeling, I don't think I'll be willing to give this a shot. I hope you guys release additional videos as I'd really like to see where this goes.
KingPin L. Posted 7 months ago
That's fair Chris. Unfortunately, the thing that makes it really different is the one thing we cannot mention at because it would be a massive spoiler. We're trying to figure out how to hint it though. Thanks for watching.
jack k. Posted 7 months ago
interesting
Gianna I. Posted 7 months ago
Loved hearing what The Neverman is all about! Good job guys! (Team Rosalind Revenge)
KingPin L. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks! I really like your trailer!
Gianna I. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you!
Alan N. Posted 7 months ago
I like your pitch.
Peter B. Posted 7 months ago
yeah. Need more info on what makes it different.
KingPin L. Posted 7 months ago
We're trying to figure out how. Please read below my response to Maikol.
Maikol P. Posted 7 months ago
Maybe give us a tantalizing hint as to what makes it different??? Will be interested finding about more bits of information.
KingPin L. Posted 7 months ago
We've been trying to figure a way to do that but the way the story is, even a small hint is a really big spoiler. Take a look when Mission 3 is unveiled.
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