Alpha Bet - Speechless

Liz S.
Posted 5 months ago

Wow very beautiful display of the cinematic art form! It has a lot to say about guys and their need to feel acknowledged in much the same way as women. Cinecoup encourages one to add to the story or fill in the blanks, but in truth I believe I could not do it justice. It is obvious that these great filmmakers can tell a much better tale than I. It is a great peice of cinema and I am glad that I watched it. Thank you very much to the team I bet they have worked very hard to accomplish what they did.

Christy L.
Posted 5 months ago

There is a really sweet and simple feel to this trailer. I really like the main character, he'll be well liked by the viewers

Cyndi F.
Posted 5 months ago

I really like this concept. I'd love to see this full film along with some of the other film ideas in the competition.

Alex C.
Posted 6 months ago

Nice work! I like what you guys chose to do with this clip seeing as you couldn't use words. Develops personality in your character.

Jeff M.
Posted 6 months ago

Speechless mission has left me speechless!! Excited to see how this film works out. Good luck Team! :)

LIs D.
Posted 6 months ago

Really enjoyed your speechless clip. No need for words to tell this story. Well done and good luck with this.

Micah S.
Posted 6 months ago

The music was kind of nice, and the shots were good too, but that's about it and I expected some more from this video. You guys can do better!

Anna D.
Posted 6 months ago

Ummmm....what was the point again? Didn't get anything about the story from this video. Anyway, good luck to your team.

Crystal V.
Posted 6 months ago

I really enjoyed the cut to the score, I think the intention was to show emotional response to a possible break up possible over text? went form happy to missing/saddness?

Crystal D.
Posted 6 months ago

Nice score but nothing happened here at all and what is your intention . I don't inderstnad why we are just showing someone dressing

Cat R.
Posted 6 months ago

The music is catchy, fit the scene. The fellow was good-looking which held my attention for the 1.5 minutes. :-)

jane D.
Posted 6 months ago

love the music

Dave S.
Posted 6 months ago

I really loved all the music in this one. I think it sounds really awesome. Keep up all of the good work.

Daniella M.
Posted 6 months ago

Lovely lighting, great music. Gorgeous actors. Excited about the project, but not sure what happens in this scene.

Megan P.
Posted 7 months ago

Well this didn't really grab me and make me want to watch the show, I am not really down with the premise - sleep your way through the alphabet, really? The actor looks like he'll be good though!

Renee D.
Posted 7 months ago

liked the music and his ponderous mood yet the clip jumps from the getting dressed to looking out the window and I feel like we're watching him gaze for a very long time.

Carleigh B.
Posted 7 months ago

I think it's very interesting to watch someone do something that seems mundane (like getting dressed) just that little bit of the scene was full of life. well done

Jennifer C.
Posted 7 months ago

What happens next: He calls the girl and explains that she is the only one for him. She calls bull-shit because she saw him with another girl the night before.

Aiden C.
Posted 7 months ago

Really didn't add anything to the story. Also based on the trailer it seems a little out of place. Really have no idea what direction this project plans to go in.

Abby C.
Posted 7 months ago

You could have done so much better! Tell us something more about the characters, their habits, their thoughts...how does this add to the progression of the plot?

Makenna C.
Posted 7 months ago

Apart from the fact that the guy looks really good, I don't think I'm taking anything back from this video. Sorry guys, didn't work for me.

Allen Y.
Posted 7 months ago

That tattoo is pretty cool but I didn't feel like I got much more out of it than that. The music's okay but I didn't get the story.

Makayla L.
Posted 7 months ago

The music was kind of nice, and the shots were good too, but that's about it and I expected some more from this video. You guys can do better!

Bianca B.
Posted 7 months ago

It is really nicely shot and all, but it really doesn't take the story forward at all. Sorry to say this, but dissappointed.

Nevaeh G.
Posted 7 months ago

Ummmm....what was the point again? Didn't get anything about the story from this video. Anyway, good luck to your team.

bhawna g.
Posted 7 months ago

You could have done so much better! Tell us something more about the characters, their habits, their thoughts...how does this add to the progression of the plot?

reshma c.
Posted 7 months ago

Apart from the fact that the guy looks really good, I don't think I'm taking anything back from this video. Sorry guys, didn't work for me.

nithi c.
Posted 7 months ago

The music was kind of nice, and the shots were good too, but that's about it and I expected some more from this video. You guys can do better!

nisha k.
Posted 7 months ago

It is really nicely shot and all, but it really doesn't take the story forward at all. Sorry to say this, but dissappointed.

aarti K.
Posted 7 months ago

Ummmm....what was the point again? Didn't get anything about the story from this video. Anyway, good luck to your team.

James M.
Posted 7 months ago

So there was a lot of extreme close ups in that but i'm not really sure what was happening in the video

Tina V.
Posted 7 months ago

good job, would have liked to see more story here

Ashley H.
Posted 7 months ago

Yep, you have a good looking guy; I'm assuming by the last shot he is remorseful - maybe he lost his friend in all of this? I'm not sure, and that's frustrating.

Leah N.
Posted 7 months ago

You could have done so much better! Tell us something more about the characters, their habits, their thoughts...how does this add to the progression of the plot?

Maya F.
Posted 7 months ago

Apart from the fact that the guy looks really good, I don't think I'm taking anything back from this video. Sorry guys, didn't work for me.

Lauren C.
Posted 7 months ago

The music was kind of nice, and the shots were good too, but that's about it and I expected some more from this video. You guys can do better!

Grace P.
Posted 7 months ago

It is really nicely shot and all, but it really doesn't take the story forward at all. Sorry to say this, but dissappointed.

Sydney B.
Posted 7 months ago

Ummmm....what was the point again? Didn't get anything about the story from this video. Anyway, good luck to your team.

Michelle G.
Posted 7 months ago

there were definitely some good moments here but I have to agree with Janai - there needed to be more of a story. It started to get a little boring.

Janai R.
Posted 7 months ago

The visuals are good. But would have liked a bit more of a story. I know its hard with no dialogue but a little more would have been nice.

Candy H.
Posted 7 months ago

it looks like he is getting ready to go out and try out those pick up lines to get the girls in the beginning of the scene.

Eric T.
Posted 7 months ago

I could see this as being part of the movie but it doesn't really tell me anything about what's going on in the story. It seems like a scene chosen at random.

Colin T.
Posted 7 months ago

I would tend to agree with some of the posts below, the music is really good here and it's shot very well but maybe i'm missing something about the story. I will watch further though as this is just one small scene, i'm sure more is to come.

Iwona b.
Posted 7 months ago

Very nice music but that is all. Nothing really to get from this piece. No action and nothing happens.

Fraser C.
Posted 7 months ago

Not sure what the story is here. I did not feel moved or hooked to watch any longer. It looks like a dating site commercial perhaps, no offence but something is missing.

André R.
Posted 7 months ago

You could have done so much better! Tell us something more about the characters, their habits, their thoughts...how does this add to the progression of the plot?

Alexis L.
Posted 7 months ago

Apart from the fact that the guy looks really good, I don't think I'm taking anything back from this video. Sorry guys, didn't work for me.

Étienne L.
Posted 7 months ago

The music was kind of nice, and the shots were good too, but that's about it and I expected some more from this video. You guys can do better!

Jean P.
Posted 7 months ago

It is really nicely shot and all, but it really doesn't take the story forward at all. Sorry to say this, but dissappointed.

Joseph M.
Posted 7 months ago

Ummmm....what was the point again? Didn't get anything about the story from this video. Anyway, good luck to your team.

Markene K.
Posted 7 months ago

I actually like the slow paced evolution of the scenes gave me an opportunity to relate to the internal process of the characters emotions . Excited to see more.

Andrea M.
Posted 7 months ago

Looks nice, but I'm not completely sure what's happening. I'm interested enough, however, to go back to your project page and find out!

Matthew J.
Posted 7 months ago

First time seeing any of your work, and I couldn't really tell where your movie is going. Some parts were awkward.

Jacob R.
Posted 7 months ago

Good luck, this is the first I have seen of your work but will go back and explore the other missions

Sean C.
Posted 7 months ago

Really good job guys. I enjoyed what you have done with this and look forward to seeing you in the top 40!

Kathy A.
Posted 7 months ago

I love the subtleties in your lead's expressions. You really can tell what he's thinking by the expression in his eyes. Well done

John K.
Posted 7 months ago

Well shot. It looks beautiful. I don't k ow that the scene advanced much or told a story. Still I liked it.

Kevin G.
Posted 7 months ago

I liked it! I could be completely misinterpreting the scene but it felt like he was suffering some regret about the bet. Well shot and edited and the music suited the mood, at least by my understanding of the scene.

Ryan B.
Posted 7 months ago

at some point, one get's cocky and try's to fit into pants that are far too small. I understand diets are really high tech these days....

Ramona B.
Posted 7 months ago

This felt like a music video, rather than a scene from a film. Although well shot and edited, I would suggest more contemporary music.

Ally P.
Posted 7 months ago

Nicely shot Mission. I definitely need a little bit more context in order to connect to the scene and/or the character though.

Ashley T.
Posted 7 months ago

I love the sexy man. However i dont really get how that has to do with you movie. is it about a male stripper

Kenzie T.
Posted 7 months ago

yeah i think you guys need to give a little bit more here. I like what you guys have done so far. this just fell flat

Mack t.
Posted 7 months ago

I was slightly confused here. Dont get me wrong it is very nice to stare at a half naked man for a 1.5 mins

Ashley T.
Posted 7 months ago

it would be good i we got a little more information on what is going on in this scene. i know it's out of context

Heather T.
Posted 7 months ago

it was alright. i was confused though throughout the video. best of luck guys. i would like to see more

Ashley S.
Posted 7 months ago

I am not quite sure what is going on. there really isnt much going on. i also dont like how there is just black spots

Afzal H.
Posted 7 months ago

We wanted to see a narrative snapshot from your film that showed off your vision & ability to tell a story using a camera and cuts. But in this sequence there is no narrative. We see a good looking guy who is fit then we see his close-ups while he thinks about a girl. Hope we see more in terms of story in the next missions. Good luck guys.

Beverley R.
Posted 7 months ago

Great body.........not sure what the movie is about I'll have to go back and look at the trailer again but this did not grab my attention.

Carolyn K.
Posted 7 months ago

Enjoyed the soundtrack and the lighting - how it reflects off the window with him and how it finds her face when all else is dark gave a lot of drama.

Andre S.
Posted 7 months ago

Thanks Carolyn! Really appreciate your feedback :)

Sarah N.
Posted 7 months ago

I liked the music but the symbol sound was a little too loud for me. I thought the lighting was fantastic.

Tara D.
Posted 7 months ago

Nicely shot and a great soundtrack. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to grasp where the story was heading.

Natalia N.
Posted 7 months ago

I agree. I wish there was a little more to the scene. I wasn't sure what really happened but great score

Skye B.
Posted 7 months ago

Afraid I didn't quite get the concept, but I really liked how it was shot. Great background song of choice!

Karyn T.
Posted 7 months ago

Like a few of the other video clips i have now watched, i really didn't have any idea what was going on in this clip.

Jeff B.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm not really sure what you were trying to convey with this video. There's not a lot of context given.

Aiden V.
Posted 7 months ago

It's hard to understand what is going on, not sure of the overall point here either and worried that it does not hold ones interest

Bobbi F.
Posted 7 months ago

I think the shots look fantastic but I'd also like to know a little more about the storyline from this.

Amy Z.
Posted 7 months ago

I feel almost like I am watching a bad commercial for a phone dating service. I appreciate the trailer and other missions so much though, I look forward to whats next.

Tia A.
Posted 7 months ago

It's hard to understand what is going on, doesn't seem like the music really matches or furthers the scene either.

Thomas A.
Posted 7 months ago

This is really well shot and clearly on a professional level. The actors are great, but I'm left with not really understanding what the character is going through or what the story arc is for this scene. Some establishing shots could have helped with this perhaps.

Dana B.
Posted 7 months ago

Not sure of the overall point here. A demo reel for a DP or a moving head shot for an actor? Was there a story here?

Andre S.
Posted 7 months ago

Well I edited this so thanks for the feedback. However I think the actors and music are awesome! :)

Joanne M.
Posted 7 months ago

Not sure where this is leading or how it will hold ones interest for very long. I agree a bit uneventful

Krystle B.
Posted 7 months ago

So, he is having trouble getting over a woman from his past. I'm not sure what the long dressing sequence fits with that.

Andre S.
Posted 7 months ago

Correct! Thanks for your comment :)

Kerry M.
Posted 7 months ago

I have to agree with the other comments on this one there isn't much going on here to hold your interest.

Dallas M.
Posted 7 months ago

The scene is very slow and uneventful and I am afraid it did not hold my interest long enough - sorry guys

Lisa L.
Posted 7 months ago

nice looking guy, believable that he would enter into this bet, but the music is kinda cheesy 80s and doesn't quite fit the 'pick up' idea. also, not much is really happening here.

Liz M.
Posted 7 months ago

Fair enough, thanks for your input Lisa! I suppose we focused a bit too much on character and not enough on story!

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