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Jack the conman returns to his shack after a hard day's work tricking people from their money, but a nasty surprise lies waiting for him...

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Meagan the Ripper?

Meagan, the writer, having a blast as doubling up for Jack the Ripper.

Make-up

"Jack" getting scarred up.

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Jenna V.
Posted 5 months ago

I really wanted you guys to make it further. I thought you had a really interesting story to work with. The speechless clip helped prove it!

Foxbase A.
Posted 5 months ago

Jack and Jill went up the hill and... It's a fresh look at an old tale, I will give you gents props for that:)

Celene C.
Posted 5 months ago

Little dark, but it feels a little eerie.

Marly V.
Posted 5 months ago

The use of the darkness is a good effect. And I enjoy the lighting in the scene. Strange ending. Sort of a cliff hanger.

Sandra l.
Posted 5 months ago

The costume and the lighting really make an impact on the how spooky it feels. It was a hard mission.

Adrian R.
Posted 6 months ago

There is a time and a place for juxtaposition, and this definitely uses it in all the right places.

Sierra G.
Posted 6 months ago

Interesting choice for a scene with no dialogue. Is he hallucinating? Is a ghost messing with him? Leaves the audience asking questions.

Samson W.
Posted 6 months ago

I don't know if this is my favourite one, but I did enjoy some things about it. Good luck in the competition!

Melissa W.
Posted 6 months ago

I'm really excited for this movie. It was a little dark in the beginning, but it suited the scene....it gave a nice eerie feeling and really encouraged me, as a viewer, to feel that sense of foreboding.

Brenda H.
Posted 6 months ago

This video leaves me with a lot of questions. What is going on in this scene? The audio was good, although the walking sound effect seemed a little off.

Glen H.
Posted 6 months ago

Nice transition from title to video. I would like to see a little more light in the scene here, even though I know it might be a bit unrealistic. It's hard to see at times.

Paul J.
Posted 6 months ago

Not too bad, wasn't my favourite and was lit a little too dark but I still think the project is cool overall

Bren W.
Posted 6 months ago

The use of darkness is effective, but you need to be careful we can actually still see what's going on .

Simon P.
Posted 6 months ago

What can I say, I love the darkness of this movie, I am slightly biased as my daughter plays Jill, great job to all

Paula M.
Posted 6 months ago

It’s a little tough watching this because it is so dark. Lighten it up with some moonlight filtering in or some candles sitting around.

Simon P.
Posted 6 months ago

nice work

Joslyn P.
Posted 6 months ago

The opening was intriguing, I do think the lighting could have been a little better... But good luck :)

jane D.
Posted 6 months ago

good luck guys

Alice A.
Posted 6 months ago

Background was kinda phony but...definitely scary looking.

Dave S.
Posted 6 months ago

Not necessarily my first choice. but it definitely does seem intriguing. sometimes when i see projects like this i just wonder.

Elizabeth S.
Posted 6 months ago

Interesting opening, and the timing really brought up the tension. Sort of confused unto who shot the girl.

Melanie O.
Posted 6 months ago

I found the scene very slow and very dark. Better lighting and color, I feel, would have made a huge difference

Bert T.
Posted 7 months ago

found this scene to be a little too dark and thought it was difficult to see. Because of that it didn't hold my interest.

L D.
Posted 7 months ago

Great effects with the sound and music and also the the use of silence. I was waiting for something to pop out when he was counting the change.

Nikola R.
Posted 7 months ago

It was really well done it just seemed to be going a little bit slow I love the ending but I don't really see how it really resemble your last teaser so I'm hopping to see the connection if its ever made. Sound was great acting was great overall very good! :) .

Melissa L.
Posted 7 months ago

Really well done! Intruiging to think whether the woman is real or not and what exactly Jack is running from...

Tony B.
Posted 7 months ago

Excellent job with the makeup. I like the darkness of your scenes and the music keeps it suspenseful.

Layla C.
Posted 7 months ago

very suspenseful! i almost hate how it ended because i wanted to see what happens next. Thumbs up on the lighting

Carolyn D.
Posted 7 months ago

I think you were smart in picking a scene that even in a feature wouldn't require any dialogue - also you've given us a nice micro story but still left enough questions to keep us interested!

Merle P.
Posted 7 months ago

Two thumbs up...add as much blodd and guts and gore as you can...people love that stuff and ACTION, action.

Jennifer C.
Posted 7 months ago

What happens next: The person lying down suddenly pops up screaming. The guy starts hitting her on the head thus killing her and getting blood everywhere.

Heather F.
Posted 7 months ago

very very cool. lovin' the speechless

Louise M.
Posted 7 months ago

I agree with Alivia here! Love the spin on the traditional rhyme, the spooky music, exaggerated sounds, the sense of uneasiness...very creepy!

Iris B.
Posted 7 months ago

Really good use of sound, especially the footsteps and the music that comes in. I'm wondering if he'll make it!

alivia d.
Posted 7 months ago

I cannot think of this being made in any other way. It is just perfect! The music, the characters, the make up, the lighting; it all ties up so neatly together! Wow!

chandan s.
Posted 7 months ago

The music track did it for me. The way the music worked itself up to the climax was just brilliant. I think it actually makes a better point than any dialogue or text could have possibly done.

amarjeet y.
Posted 7 months ago

It is so hard to find just the right balance between suspense and thrill and I have to say it, this is just perfect! Nailed it! Keep up the good work!

sonia s.
Posted 7 months ago

That moment when Jack turned around and froze in shock! I froze too. So subtle and yet so potent! Really well made. Would love to see more from you people.

pankaj k.
Posted 7 months ago

Not only did I not miss speech in the video, I actually thought it was completely unrequired and would have probably spoiled the suspense of the video. I am impressed.

farhan k.
Posted 7 months ago

Despite the fact that you can't use dialogues or text while delivering the story, you have managed to captivate your audience. The mark of a true storyteller! Working your way through limitations and turning them into your strengths. Good job!

arpit t.
Posted 7 months ago

Glad to see you are consistently delivering. This one was a great watch, and told a story through the light, and make up. Nicely done.

Parker L.
Posted 7 months ago

This is like watching the story come alive with each successive video. Very intricately detailed, must say!

Jonah B.
Posted 7 months ago

Also, the brooding, silent character that this video gives to Jack completely ties up with the environment in which he's being shown since childhood. The way he freezes when he turns around!

Sebastian C.
Posted 7 months ago

So true! All the previous videos feel like back stories leading up to this one. The scars on Jack's face for example! We can see what Jill's attack has done to him. Great going!

Hudson M.
Posted 7 months ago

I like how the story is successively building up with each new mission. At every step, you have something new to offer. I am intrigued.

Jordan .
Posted 7 months ago

Finally a view of the protagonist, and it just keeps getting better! The scars are really well made. Good luck!

Cooper B.
Posted 7 months ago

I am speechless! Pun intended! Jokes apart, I think you have tackled the mission very well. Enjoyed the video and looking forward to more!

Ryder L.
Posted 7 months ago

This video is going to give me nightmares. The scars! That creepy guy in the corner! Give us the whole story already!

Ben S.
Posted 7 months ago

It's amazing how you have stood up to the challenge of no speech. Not only have you met the target, but you've actually managed to use that to your advantage! Impressive.

Blake N.
Posted 7 months ago

Funny how simple things like opening doors and coins falling on a table can add to the eeriness of a scene. Great job people!

Cameron P.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm getting goosebumps! The entire sequence was so chilling! Can't wait to see more from you people!

Matthew J.
Posted 7 months ago

I like the way the story builds up in the video, moving from darkness to light to deliver a big shock to the audience. Very effective. Good luck!

Grayson L.
Posted 7 months ago

Completele agree with the comment written above. Didn't miss speech in the entire video! This is amazing.

Nolan B.
Posted 7 months ago

Absolutely loved the sound effects! They speak for themselves! Did not miss speech anywhere in the video.

Nora J.
Posted 7 months ago

This is a brilliant piece of work, team Tumbling After. You've really managed to make the most of the mission and deliver your best. The sound, the lighting, the camera and the actors are all incredibly good. Good to see such talented people come together in a team. Keep it up!

Rebecca P.
Posted 7 months ago

Is this how they first meet? Or does Jack not see him at all? I absolutely have to know the rest of this story!

Paige H.
Posted 7 months ago

Are those the two protagonists? Jack and Jack the Ripper? This just got so much more interesting than before. The suspense is killing me!

Victoria D.
Posted 7 months ago

Not only have you people nailed the mission, you've also managed to totally grab your audience's attention! I won't be surprised it you come out clear winners! I know I'll root for this team.

jasmine C.
Posted 7 months ago

The costume and make up are so good! As with the sound engineering! I think your team has done a fabulous job of bringing the story alive.

Savannah S.
Posted 7 months ago

It is so good to see someone actually looking into children's literature to find inspiration! I wish I could think like your team. You manage to make your mark while working with the smallest of things. Great going, people! :D

Reese L.
Posted 7 months ago

It's true! You guys are clear winners. Your attention to details, your story telling techniques are all just impeccable. I can't wait to see the whole film either!

Faith S.
Posted 7 months ago

This is so awesome! The thrill, the suspense, the goosebumps that it gave me! I can't wait for you to win the competition and show us the whole film!

Faith S.
Posted 7 months ago

I was so scared when the guy in the corner started moving towards Jack! I think I'm going to end up with nightmares tonight. God, you really meant horror when you said horror! :D

Sierra T.
Posted 7 months ago

I like how you have covered every last detail in terms of sound Every thing is accurate and exact - right from the opening of the door and latching of the lock to the chair moving back as Jack stands up. These details make you stand apart from the rest!

Grim D.
Posted 7 months ago

You guys had me watching with bated breath as I saw that creepy shadow slowly creeping towards the guy! Good going guys - my votes are with you. :-)

Sam C.
Posted 7 months ago

Excellent speechless sequence! I have been following your missions all along and the work has been some of the most professional so far. Rock on, guys!

Alice B.
Posted 7 months ago

Haha! This made me feel like a little kid listening to scary stories from my mother. She used to make these faces and sounds and I would always lean in so that I could take in every last sound she made. You guys are really good storytellers. Cheers!

Mila L.
Posted 7 months ago

I completely agree. There is this sense of suspense and thrill and I felt like I need to take in every sound and movement or I will miss out on something great. Loved the video as much as the ones that came before! Good going!

Danica M.
Posted 7 months ago

Is it just me or are all the other sounds really much sharper in the absence of speech? It's as if I can hear every last breath and I'm straining harder because I'm scared I'll miss out some important clue! Specially loved the sound of the drink pouring into the glass.

Kylie P.
Posted 7 months ago

The more I see your videos, the more I want to see the rest if the story! Desperately trying to figure out what must have happened between the childhood events and what we see now. This is so tempting!

Arianna F.
Posted 7 months ago

These videos are so detail oriented! Every last detail is taken care of right from the scars on Jack's face to the light on the coins! I really admire your eye for finer detailing

Abby C.
Posted 7 months ago

Oh god you people are just totally changing the way I thought of that nursery rhyme. I'll never be able to think of that rhyme the same way again! Who would have thought a simple children's poem could have so much horror inside! Eagerly waiting for the rest of the story!

Makenna C.
Posted 7 months ago

How did you even make those scars! They look so darned real! Aaaaargh it makes my skin crawl. That being said, it must have taken a whole lot of work didn't it? A part of me is actually secretly dying to get a better view of Jack's face. Haha!

Makayla L.
Posted 7 months ago

Wonderfully made, you guys. I can't wait to finally get to see the whole story. Thoroughly enjoying the build up that you are giving us. The suspense is killling

Bianca B.
Posted 7 months ago

I agree with the person above. Not only is speechlessness the requirement of the sequence, it is also the final outcome! Very clever!

Nevaeh G.
Posted 7 months ago

I think the situation that was selected for depiction in this clip is very apt. The sequence is such that it lends itself to the parameters of speechlessness very well and the results are visible. This is an intelligently planned piece of work, and you deserve all the praise you're getting for it.

Piper F.
Posted 7 months ago

I cannot think of this being made in any other way. It is just perfect! The music, the characters, the make up, the lighting; it all ties up so neatly together! Wow!

Ainsley L.
Posted 7 months ago

The music track did it for me. The way the music worked itself up to the climax was just brilliant. I think it actually makes a better point than any dialogue or text could have possibly done.

Sienna M.
Posted 7 months ago

It is so hard to find just the right balance between suspense and thrill and I have to say it, this is just perfect! Nailed it! Keep up the good work!

Clara G.
Posted 7 months ago

That moment when Jack turned around and froze in shock! I froze too. So subtle and yet so potent! Really well made. Would love to see more from you people.

Kaelyn R.
Posted 7 months ago

Not only did I not miss speech in the video, I actually thought it was completely unrequired and would have probably spoiled the suspense of the video. I am impressed.

Chelsea B.
Posted 7 months ago

Ellie T.
Posted 7 months ago

Glad to see you are consistently delivering. This one was a great watch, and told a story through the light, and make up. Nicely done.

Natalie M.
Posted 7 months ago

This is like watching the story come alive with each successive video. Very intricately detailed, must say!

Madeleine M.
Posted 7 months ago

Also, the brooding, silent character that this video gives to Jack completely ties up with the environment in which he's being shown since childhood. The way he freezes when he turns around!

Eden S.
Posted 7 months ago

So true! All the previous videos feel like back stories leading up to this one. The scars on Jack's face for example! We can see what Jill's attack has done to him. Great going!

Liam D.
Posted 7 months ago

I like how the story is successively building up with each new mission. At every step, you have something new to offer. I am intrigued.

Austin L.
Posted 7 months ago

Finally a view of the protagonist, and it just keeps getting better! The scars are really well made. Good luck!

Matthew P.
Posted 7 months ago

I am speechless! Pun intended! Jokes apart, I think you have tackled the mission very well. Enjoyed the video and looking forward to more!

Luca S.
Posted 7 months ago

This video is going to give me nightmares. The scars! That creepy guy in the corner! Give us the whole story already!

Dylan T.
Posted 7 months ago

It's amazing how you have stood up to the challenge of no speech. Not only have you met the target, but you've actually managed to use that to your advantage! Impressive.

Henry H.
Posted 7 months ago

Funny how simple things like opening doors and coins falling on a table can add to the eeriness of a scene. Great job people!

Nathaniel B.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm getting goosebumps! The entire sequence was so chilling! Can't wait to see more from you people!

Elliot T.
Posted 7 months ago

I like the way the story builds up in the video, moving from darkness to light to deliver a big shock to the audience. Very effective. Good luck!

Brody R.
Posted 7 months ago

Completele agree with the comment written above. Didn't miss speech in the entire video! This is amazing.

Colton M.
Posted 7 months ago

Absolutely loved the sound effects! They speak for themselves! Did not miss speech anywhere in the video.

soumya c.
Posted 7 months ago

Callum L.
Posted 7 months ago

Is this how they first meet? Or does Jack not see him at all? I absolutely have to know the rest of this story!

Wyatt L.
Posted 7 months ago

Are those the two protagonists? Jack and Jack the Ripper? This just got so much more interesting than before. The suspense is killing me!

Rylan L.
Posted 7 months ago

Not only have you people nailed the mission, you've also managed to totally grab your audience's attention! I won't be surprised it you come out clear winners! I know I'll root for this team.

Justin M.
Posted 7 months ago

The costume and make up are so good! As with the sound engineering! I think your team has done a fabulous job of bringing the story alive.

Erik P.
Posted 7 months ago

Damien N.
Posted 7 months ago

It's true! You guys are clear winners. Your attention to details, your story telling techniques are all just impeccable. I can't wait to see the whole film either!

Harrison L.
Posted 7 months ago

This is so awesome! The thrill, the suspense, the goosebumps that it gave me! I can't wait for you to win the competition and show us the whole film!

Anthony G.
Posted 7 months ago

I was so scared when the guy in the corner started moving towards Jack! I think I'm going to end up with nightmares tonight. God, you really meant horror when you said horror! :D

David f.
Posted 7 months ago

Shannon T.
Posted 7 months ago

Good luck, guys! I've always been a fan.

Simone F.
Posted 7 months ago

Not my fave of your vids but I still love ya!

Parminder P.
Posted 7 months ago

I didn't love this. Wanted to see more of the kid from the trailer I feel his acting is a lot stronger but not bad.

Tawni B.
Posted 7 months ago

I was completely drawn in. I'm always scared that there is someone lurking in the shadows. I assume that's Jack all grown up, but who's the girl? Jack doesn't seem to upset about her throat being slit..

Jennifer R.
Posted 7 months ago

Nice work! I have to agree that it is a little dark at times, but it is nonetheless entertaining. Nice!

Kirsty R.
Posted 7 months ago

Really cool! Some shots are a little dark but overall creepy and fun. Costumes and sets are looking good

Avery L.
Posted 7 months ago

This video is going to give me nightmares. The scars! That creepy guy in the corner! Give us the whole story already!

Maddox L.
Posted 7 months ago

I like how the story is successively building up with each new mission. At every step, you have something new to offer. I am intrigued.

Levi G.
Posted 7 months ago

Finally a view of the protagonist, and it just keeps getting better! The scars are really well made. Good luck!

Andrew R.
Posted 7 months ago

I am speechless! Pun intended! Jokes apart, I think you have tackled the mission very well. Enjoyed the video and looking forward to more!

Felix G.
Posted 7 months ago

It's amazing how you have stood up to the challenge of no speech. Not only have you met the target, but you've actually managed to use that to your advantage! Impressive.

Blake M.
Posted 7 months ago

Funny how simple things like opening doors and coins falling on a table can add to the eeriness of a scene. Great job people!

Eli L.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm getting goosebumps! The entire sequence was so chilling! Can't wait to see more from you people!

Micah S.
Posted 7 months ago

I like the way the story builds up in the video, moving from darkness to light to deliver a big shock to the audience. Very effective. Good luck!

Ben B.
Posted 7 months ago

Completele agree with the comment written above. Didn't miss speech in the entire video! This is amazing.

Emmett M.
Posted 7 months ago

Absolutely loved the sound effects! They speak for themselves! Did not miss speech anywhere in the video.

tarneet s.
Posted 7 months ago

ankit g.
Posted 7 months ago

Is this how they first meet? Or does Jack not see him at all? I absolutely have to know the rest of this story!

amarjeet d.
Posted 7 months ago

Are those the two protagonists? Jack and Jack the Ripper? This just got so much more interesting than before. The suspense is killing me!

shiv s.
Posted 7 months ago

Not only have you people nailed the mission, you've also managed to totally grab your audience's attention! I won't be surprised it you come out clear winners! I know I'll root for this team.

divyansh g.
Posted 7 months ago

The costume and make up are so good! As with the sound engineering! I think your team has done a fabulous job of bringing the story alive.

ajay s.
Posted 7 months ago

sanjana j.
Posted 7 months ago

It's true! You guys are clear winners. Your attention to details, your story telling techniques are all just impeccable. I can't wait to see the whole film either!

nano j.
Posted 7 months ago

This is so awesome! The thrill, the suspense, the goosebumps that it gave me! I can't wait for you to win the competition and show us the whole film!

amar p.
Posted 7 months ago

I was so scared when the guy in the corner started moving towards Jack! I think I'm going to end up with nightmares tonight. God, you really meant horror when you said horror! :D

ajit s.
Posted 7 months ago

Richard M.
Posted 7 months ago

Interesting keep it up the whole movie is what I would like to see now you have my interest for sure

aditya d.
Posted 7 months ago

naina s.
Posted 7 months ago

megha s.
Posted 7 months ago

neha g.
Posted 7 months ago

richa s.
Posted 7 months ago

These videos are so detail oriented! Every last detail is taken care of right from the scars on Jack's face to the light on the coins! I really admire your eye for finer detailing

bhawna g.
Posted 7 months ago

reshma c.
Posted 7 months ago

nithi c.
Posted 7 months ago

Wonderfully made, you guys. I can't wait to finally get to see the whole story. Thoroughly enjoying the build up that you are giving us. The suspense is killling

nisha k.
Posted 7 months ago

I agree with the person above. Not only is speechlessness the requirement of the sequence, it is also the final outcome! Very clever!

aarti K.
Posted 7 months ago

Ajit B.
Posted 7 months ago

I cannot think of this being made in any other way. It is just perfect! The music, the characters, the make up, the lighting; it all ties up so neatly together! Wow!

Molly B.
Posted 7 months ago

The music track did it for me. The way the music worked itself up to the climax was just brilliant. I think it actually makes a better point than any dialogue or text could have possibly done.

Alexa H.
Posted 7 months ago

It is so hard to find just the right balance between suspense and thrill and I have to say it, this is just perfect! Nailed it! Keep up the good work!

Catherine R.
Posted 7 months ago

That moment when Jack turned around and froze in shock! I froze too. So subtle and yet so potent! Really well made. Would love to see more from you people.

Brianna M.
Posted 7 months ago

Not only did I not miss speech in the video, I actually thought it was completely unrequired and would have probably spoiled the suspense of the video. I am impressed.

Anna D.
Posted 7 months ago

Kayla C.
Posted 7 months ago

Glad to see you are consistently delivering. This one was a great watch, and told a story through the light, and make up. Nicely done.

Gabriella B.
Posted 7 months ago

This is like watching the story come alive with each successive video. Very intricately detailed, must say!

Julia B.
Posted 7 months ago

Also, the brooding, silent character that this video gives to Jack completely ties up with the environment in which he's being shown since childhood. The way he freezes when he turns around!

Evelyn G.
Posted 7 months ago

I like how the story is successively building up with each new mission. At every step, you have something new to offer. I am intrigued.

Rachel B.
Posted 7 months ago

Finally a view of the protagonist, and it just keeps getting better! The scars are really well made. Good luck!

Michaela B.
Posted 7 months ago

I am speechless! Pun intended! Jokes apart, I think you have tackled the mission very well. Enjoyed the video and looking forward to more!

Riley T.
Posted 7 months ago

This video is going to give me nightmares. The scars! That creepy guy in the corner! Give us the whole story already!

Brielle G.
Posted 7 months ago

It's amazing how you have stood up to the challenge of no speech. Not only have you met the target, but you've actually managed to use that to your advantage! Impressive.

Avery L.
Posted 7 months ago

Funny how simple things like opening doors and coins falling on a table can add to the eeriness of a scene. Great job people!

Nicholas G.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm getting goosebumps! The entire sequence was so chilling! Can't wait to see more from you people!

Charlie S.
Posted 7 months ago

I like the way the story builds up in the video, moving from darkness to light to deliver a big shock to the audience. Very effective. Good luck!

Benjamin T.
Posted 7 months ago

Completele agree with the comment written above. Didn't miss speech in the entire video! This is amazing.

Parker L.
Posted 7 months ago

Absolutely loved the sound effects! They speak for themselves! Did not miss speech anywhere in the video.

Charlie S.
Posted 7 months ago

The costume and make up are so good! As with the sound engineering! I think your team has done a fabulous job of bringing the story alive.

Donald Y.
Posted 7 months ago

Is she dead?

Jennifer P.
Posted 7 months ago

Wow. I enjoyed how much time you took to set the scene of him coming home, the cash on the table (what a great sound), pouring the wine, sitting back...then the music kicks in...*grin*

Peter M.
Posted 7 months ago

I am guessing this is a new interpretation of the famous story? I like where it is going, looks good!

Peter M.
Posted 7 months ago

Well done, looks promising!

James B.
Posted 7 months ago

looks good guys!

Tina V.
Posted 7 months ago

I have liked this from the beginning I would like to see a bit more of the story to come out through this as well! good luck

John K.
Posted 7 months ago

I like the twist you've given the fairly tale. I think this could be an excellent project and look forward to seeing more from the team

Jay C.
Posted 7 months ago

I thought this was an animated film! Well done over all. The lighting and camera work was really good.

Scotty W.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm glad we're back to the videos and off the hand drawn posters. This is a movie I want to see.

Amy S.
Posted 7 months ago

I love new interpretations of classic stories. You got me.

Sebastian C.
Posted 7 months ago

Hudson M.
Posted 7 months ago

Is this how they first meet? Or does Jack not see him at all? I absolutely have to know the rest of this story!

Jordan R.
Posted 7 months ago

Are those the two protagonists? Jack and Jack the Ripper? This just got so much more interesting than before. The suspense is killing me!

Cooper B.
Posted 7 months ago

Not only have you people nailed the mission, you've also managed to totally grab your audience's attention! I won't be surprised it you come out clear winners! I know I'll root for this team.

Ryder L.
Posted 7 months ago

The costume and make up are so good! As with the sound engineering! I think your team has done a fabulous job of bringing the story alive.

Ben St-Pierre S.
Posted 7 months ago

Blake N.
Posted 7 months ago

It's true! You guys are clear winners. Your attention to details, your story telling techniques are all just impeccable. I can't wait to see the whole film either!

Cameron P.
Posted 7 months ago

This is so awesome! The thrill, the suspense, the goosebumps that it gave me! I can't wait for you to win the competition and show us the whole film!

Matthew J.
Posted 7 months ago

I was so scared when the guy in the corner started moving towards Jack! I think I'm going to end up with nightmares tonight. God, you really meant horror when you said horror! :D

Grayson L.
Posted 7 months ago

Nolan B.
Posted 7 months ago

Alex D.
Posted 7 months ago

Tyson C.
Posted 7 months ago

David L.
Posted 7 months ago

Andrew M.
Posted 7 months ago

These videos are so detail oriented! Every last detail is taken care of right from the scars on Jack's face to the light on the coins! I really admire your eye for finer detailing

Leah N.
Posted 7 months ago

Maya F.
Posted 7 months ago

Lauren C.
Posted 7 months ago

Wonderfully made, you guys. I can't wait to finally get to see the whole story. Thoroughly enjoying the build up that you are giving us. The suspense is killling

Grace P.
Posted 7 months ago

I agree with the person above. Not only is speechlessness the requirement of the sequence, it is also the final outcome! Very clever!

Sydney B.
Posted 7 months ago

Mia O.
Posted 7 months ago

I cannot think of this being made in any other way. It is just perfect! The music, the characters, the make up, the lighting; it all ties up so neatly together! Wow!

Quinn S.
Posted 7 months ago

The music track did it for me. The way the music worked itself up to the climax was just brilliant. I think it actually makes a better point than any dialogue or text could have possibly done.

Peyton L.
Posted 7 months ago

It is so hard to find just the right balance between suspense and thrill and I have to say it, this is just perfect! Nailed it! Keep up the good work!

Charlotte B.
Posted 7 months ago

That moment when Jack turned around and froze in shock! I froze too. So subtle and yet so potent! Really well made. Would love to see more from you people.

Hannah B.
Posted 7 months ago

Not only did I not miss speech in the video, I actually thought it was completely unrequired and would have probably spoiled the suspense of the video. I am impressed.

Abigail B.
Posted 7 months ago

I like how the story is successively building up with each new mission. At every step, you have something new to offer. I am intrigued.

Chloe C.
Posted 7 months ago

Finally a view of the protagonist, and it just keeps getting better! The scars are really well made. Good luck!

Kaitlyn R.
Posted 7 months ago

I am speechless! Pun intended! Jokes apart, I think you have tackled the mission very well. Enjoyed the video and looking forward to more!

Ava G.
Posted 7 months ago

This video is going to give me nightmares. The scars! That creepy guy in the corner! Give us the whole story already!

Aiden C.
Posted 7 months ago

Interesting scene I enjoyed the reveal of the dead girl at the end. Looks like a interesting film.

Charles T.
Posted 7 months ago

All the while, even after she started moving I was really hoping she would be revealed as a hat rack.

Sarah P.
Posted 7 months ago

It's a bit dark - hard to see! Did Jack get that scar tumbling down the hill? Looks like a burn! Related to his guilty conscience, I imagine!

Donald Y.
Posted 7 months ago

Good use of music - But it seemed too dark - but scary. I was left wondering if the woman was real or just in his imagination.

Angela G.
Posted 7 months ago

Oh no! What did Jack do that he can not live with himself? It looks like he is on the brink of insanity!

André R.
Posted 7 months ago

Alexis L.
Posted 7 months ago

Étienne L.
Posted 7 months ago

Wonderfully made, you guys. I can't wait to finally get to see the whole story. Thoroughly enjoying the build up that you are giving us. The suspense is killling

Jean P.
Posted 7 months ago

I agree with the person above. Not only is speechlessness the requirement of the sequence, it is also the final outcome! Very clever!

Joseph M.
Posted 7 months ago

Marie A.
Posted 7 months ago

This video is going to give me nightmares. The scars! That creepy guy in the corner! Give us the whole story already!

Akshay S.
Posted 7 months ago

It's amazing how you have stood up to the challenge of no speech. Not only have you met the target, but you've actually managed to use that to your advantage! Impressive.

Aden S.
Posted 7 months ago

like how you revealed a little more about the story. thought the sound design was a little off. but good mission

Luna j.
Posted 7 months ago

wow i love the makeup ! it's great and the movie looks good ! and the Music was okay but not great

Angela J.
Posted 7 months ago

Intriguing!

Karen H.
Posted 7 months ago

Definitely great scars! They look fantastic with the lighting, I couldn't stop trying to see what was in the shadows. Well done.

Pierre G.
Posted 7 months ago

I like how the story is successively building up with each new mission. At every step, you have something new to offer. I am intrigued.

Joseph M.
Posted 7 months ago

Finally a view of the protagonist, and it just keeps getting better! The scars are really well made. Good luck!

Gabriel B.
Posted 7 months ago

I am speechless! Pun intended! Jokes apart, I think you have tackled the mission very well. Enjoyed the video and looking forward to more!

Kevin P.
Posted 7 months ago

Meh. Music was okay, but nothing happened. Foley was a little too loud and didn't sound like they were in a room

joanne s.
Posted 7 months ago

Great job on this mission felt is was done very well and left me wanting more. Really felt you captured the mission

Nelson L.
Posted 7 months ago

Wasn't familiar with this project until this point. Am certainly intrigued to see the evolution of this project after watching your speechless trailer.

Jack D.
Posted 7 months ago

Very suspenseful but most of all: ORIGINAL IDEA. Never seen or heard of any twist like this. Much of what I've seen has had elements of so many other films already out there....not this. For that alone, you should win.

phil d.
Posted 7 months ago

Ooh, nice and scary. Liked it. The cut throat wasn't all that realistic, but the scene still worked for me.

Emersen Z.
Posted 7 months ago

Very well done. this is a great use of exploring a space. The lighting was quite dark but I think that adds to the overall tone.

Todd M.
Posted 7 months ago

God I love this concept... The twisting of convention, the "parallel of history" I want to see more for from this group an any medium!!!

Jen A.
Posted 7 months ago

Completely captivating! The suspense was tangible. Very impressive for no text or dialogue! Good luck!

Kate R.
Posted 7 months ago

Can feel the suspense for sure. Nice use of sound and lighting combined with the music to create this speechless scene.

Steve A.
Posted 7 months ago

I can appreciate this for what it is. The scene itself misses the mark a tiny bit but good job overall.

Tanya G.
Posted 7 months ago

The sounds and suspense of the music is scary. It felt like something was going to happen and you just weren't sure when.

Shelley T.
Posted 7 months ago

Loved the use of the lighting. But the suspenseful music/sound coming in kinda ruined it for me.

Donal O.
Posted 7 months ago

Okokokok. Well done. That was AWESOME. Dark, forboding, creepy. Everything this project has promised to be. Excellent work

Hugh P.
Posted 7 months ago

very dark and scary, but the foot steps sounded a little funny. Overall seemed pretty cool though. hp

Sarah G.
Posted 7 months ago

Isabella F.
Posted 7 months ago

Glad to see you are consistently delivering. This one was a great watch, and told a story through the light, and make up. Nicely done.

Sophie L.
Posted 7 months ago

This is like watching the story come alive with each successive video. Very intricately detailed, must say!

Brooklyn M.
Posted 7 months ago

Also, the brooding, silent character that this video gives to Jack completely ties up with the environment in which he's being shown since childhood. The way he freezes when he turns around!

Madison G.
Posted 7 months ago

So true! All the previous videos feel like back stories leading up to this one. The scars on Jack's face for example! We can see what Jill's attack has done to him. Great going!

Zoe T.
Posted 7 months ago

Funny how simple things like opening doors and coins falling on a table can add to the eeriness of a scene. Great job people!

Lily J.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm getting goosebumps! The entire sequence was so chilling! Can't wait to see more from you people!

Ella H.
Posted 7 months ago

I like the way the story builds up in the video, moving from darkness to light to deliver a big shock to the audience. Very effective. Good luck!

Hailey H.
Posted 7 months ago

Not bad. The concept is nice - the girl trying to get to the phone and the guy catching her before she can - but I think you could have depicted it a little more dramatically.

Emily M.
Posted 7 months ago

Absolutely loved the sound effects! They speak for themselves! Did not miss speech anywhere in the video.

Ella H.
Posted 7 months ago

Sophia S.
Posted 7 months ago

Is this how they first meet? Or does Jack not see him at all? I absolutely have to know the rest of this story!

Emma J.
Posted 7 months ago

Are those the two protagonists? Jack and Jack the Ripper? This just got so much more interesting than before. The suspense is killing me!

Marie L.
Posted 7 months ago

Not only have you people nailed the mission, you've also managed to totally grab your audience's attention! I won't be surprised it you come out clear winners! I know I'll root for this team.

Marie J.
Posted 7 months ago

The costume and make up are so good! As with the sound engineering! I think your team has done a fabulous job of bringing the story alive.

Guillaume G.
Posted 7 months ago

Toussaint D.
Posted 7 months ago

It's true! You guys are clear winners. Your attention to details, your story telling techniques are all just impeccable. I can't wait to see the whole film either!

Amable D.
Posted 7 months ago

This is so awesome! The thrill, the suspense, the goosebumps that it gave me! I can't wait for you to win the competition and show us the whole film!

Gabriel P.
Posted 7 months ago

I was so scared when the guy in the corner started moving towards Jack! I think I'm going to end up with nightmares tonight. God, you really meant horror when you said horror! :D

Jean M.
Posted 7 months ago

Ignace F.
Posted 7 months ago

François X.
Posted 7 months ago

Paul T.
Posted 7 months ago

Jean F.
Posted 7 months ago

Nicolas F.
Posted 7 months ago

These videos are so detail oriented! Every last detail is taken care of right from the scars on Jack's face to the light on the coins! I really admire your eye for finer detailing

Jacques M.
Posted 7 months ago

I cannot think of this being made in any other way. It is just perfect! The music, the characters, the make up, the lighting; it all ties up so neatly together! Wow!

nithi k.
Posted 7 months ago

The music track did it for me. The way the music worked itself up to the climax was just brilliant. I think it actually makes a better point than any dialogue or text could have possibly done.

Jacques P.
Posted 7 months ago

It is so hard to find just the right balance between suspense and thrill and I have to say it, this is just perfect! Nailed it! Keep up the good work!

shilpi s.
Posted 7 months ago

That moment when Jack turned around and froze in shock! I froze too. So subtle and yet so potent! Really well made. Would love to see more from you people.

Michel P.
Posted 7 months ago

Not only did I not miss speech in the video, I actually thought it was completely unrequired and would have probably spoiled the suspense of the video. I am impressed.

Charles B.
Posted 7 months ago

Antoine C.
Posted 7 months ago

Glad to see you are consistently delivering. This one was a great watch, and told a story through the light, and make up. Nicely done.

Louis L.
Posted 7 months ago

This is like watching the story come alive with each successive video. Very intricately detailed, must say!

Luis R P.
Posted 7 months ago

Great suspense, great music. Everybody is commenting on the makeup and for good reasons, great job!!

Nidhi c.
Posted 7 months ago

Also, the brooding, silent character that this video gives to Jack completely ties up with the environment in which he's being shown since childhood. The way he freezes when he turns around!

François G.
Posted 7 months ago

So true! All the previous videos feel like back stories leading up to this one. The scars on Jack's face for example! We can see what Jill's attack has done to him. Great going!

Akshay S.
Posted 7 months ago

It's amazing how you have stood up to the challenge of no speech. Not only have you met the target, but you've actually managed to use that to your advantage! Impressive.

manoj p.
Posted 7 months ago

Funny how simple things like opening doors and coins falling on a table can add to the eeriness of a scene. Great job people!

Vaibhav R.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm getting goosebumps! The entire sequence was so chilling! Can't wait to see more from you people!

Aakash s.
Posted 7 months ago

I like the way the story builds up in the video, moving from darkness to light to deliver a big shock to the audience. Very effective. Good luck!

Alexa S.
Posted 7 months ago

Completele agree with the comment written above. Didn't miss speech in the entire video! This is amazing.

Aaron j.
Posted 7 months ago

Absolutely loved the sound effects! They speak for themselves! Did not miss speech anywhere in the video.

lisa m.
Posted 7 months ago

I loved the sound of the coins! Added to the scene and was different. Thought the soundtrack was great and suspenseful.

Michelle G.
Posted 7 months ago

I like that you've shown something different than the trailer and we actually get to see your main character. However I found the shots too dark - like I was supposed to be seeing something but couldn't. Not sure if it was just me.

Carolyn K.
Posted 7 months ago

Ooohh! Chills! Can't wait to see more. Loved the cinematography and the soundtrack. Great job!

Derek H.
Posted 7 months ago

Nice work with this video! It was hard to tell what the sounds were off the start (whatever the outside noise was). Otherwise, great use of sound, and the music was a nice touch to build suspense.

Mara F.
Posted 7 months ago

I really liked this and really stayed true to the mission given. I liked the person in the back and how they were slowly introduced

Afzal H.
Posted 7 months ago

Make-up is amazing - it's telling its own story, adds so much to the character. Bravo on how you introduce the creep in the corner - now that was scary!

Susan C.
Posted 7 months ago

Very creepy guy in the corner. Jack didn't seem to get as startled by him or the body as I'd have liked but I'm sure there's good reason for that and we'll discover more later.

Erin C.
Posted 7 months ago

Very creepy scene. The make-up is very well done, but I'm curious to how he got the scars? Hope to find out more ...

Kari W.
Posted 7 months ago

Whiskey... That's what a rash ridden, contemplative con man comes home to, whiskey. otherwise, good creep factor.

Jane M.
Posted 7 months ago

Creepy sequence. Wondered what was happening to his face. A rash?.

LeeAnn D.
Posted 7 months ago

inthe trailer Jack gets bashed to death by a rock by Jill......or so we thought....but he survived and he is very scarred :)

Emily B.
Posted 7 months ago

This whole scene left me with so many questions, was the man really there?, if so what did he want with Jack? So many questions!

Carolyn v.
Posted 7 months ago

The music and the shot of someone else being in the room built suspense nicely. It had me trying to guess what would happen next.

Marc S.
Posted 7 months ago

great surprise end however I get distracted by things like pouring a glass of wine from a bottle of wine that has been left open all day?

Diane N.
Posted 7 months ago

I liked your Speechless Sequence. It was a good cliff-hanger, making me wonder who that person is on the chair, and how he got there? Good sound effects and acting.

Skye B.
Posted 7 months ago

Really cool - can't wait for more!

Colin T.
Posted 7 months ago

This actually made me go back and review the rest of your project. It has pulled me in and I will be following your progress. The end was creepy and very well done.

Ann-Marie S.
Posted 7 months ago

This defeniently one creepy little flick. Loojs luke one I will defenitly have to check out. Can't wait to see mire

Heather G.
Posted 7 months ago

Even without words, this really adds to the story. It showed me another side to the film I haven't seen yet. Looking forward to seeing more.

Yvonne L.
Posted 7 months ago

creepy !

Natalie B.
Posted 7 months ago

It's like you can hear everything so well except for jack the ripper's footsteps. Very sinister. I like the lighting and makeup effects.

Samantha M.
Posted 7 months ago

this is filmed in my building?

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

It was filmed at the Royal Mansions, if that helps :)

Michelle S.
Posted 7 months ago

very creepy ! but i love it , the music and the makeup are awesome. maybe i will watch this movie when it's finished.

Jason T.
Posted 7 months ago

Pretty creepy. The guy's makeup looked pretty damn good and I love the colouring of this movie. The concept is creepy as hell.

Kendra W.
Posted 7 months ago

Awesome sound and makeup! Very creepy, I can't handle horror movies and your ad made me want to not watch the whole film haha, so you're element of horror/suspense is definitely coming alone well!

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

Haha, glad to hear it worked in that regard. Hopefully you will have a chance to see the whole film anyway :) Thanks!

Tatiana Z.
Posted 7 months ago

It was just a teeny bit too dark at the beginning for my taste, but obviously that boils down to personal preference and you do need there to be a contrast between the beginning and when he lights a candle. Great job on make-up though, and I was certainly engaged the whole time!

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

That is what we were going for, but your concerns are noted! I am glad you enjoyed the rest of it. Thank you for your feedback!

LeeAnn D.
Posted 7 months ago

Creepy Jill.... Yes I was held in suspense...that's hard to do in 90 seconds....go all the way!!!!!!!

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

Glad to hear it. Thank you! :)

Kate W.
Posted 7 months ago

Very suspenseful. Good Job

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

Thank you, Kate W. :)

Rod N.
Posted 7 months ago

Good job. I was riveted. I like how you go from being on his side and feeling for him as the evil comes out of the darkness, to instantly jumping the other direction as you see that it is his own mind playing tricks, or perhaps a ghost out for revenge, and he his the evil. Make up hint. Blood is a liquid. Apply it in the position that your actor will be in when the scene is shot, the blood running down the front of her throat says she died standing up and wasn't laid down until after her blood dried.

Harmin K.
Posted 7 months ago

I think the body was supposed to have been left there man, so yeah she was standing when she was killed

Jolene K.
Posted 7 months ago

interesting but I don't know if it is your filming but i found it a little dark and hard to see. but I did see what his surprise was

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

Thank you for your concerns! Duly noted. Thank you for watching and commenting!

Wesley S.
Posted 7 months ago

This project is moving in the right direction. The the scene gets you to settle into the jack's moment to unwind, and then steals that from you with the last two sequences. Great! Sound effects/Audio works well, even down to the coins. Maybe a bit more light.. as it was tough to see detail on a monitor.

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

Thank you for the lovely compliment! The lighting was partially intentional but the input is appreciated, we're glad the reaction is positive overall!

Lindsay S.
Posted 7 months ago

Good scene. Very suspenseful. Lighting could have been a bit better maybe, but definitely left me interested in seeing more.

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

Glad to hear it! Hopefully we'll have more to reveal next time ;) Thank you for the watch and comment!

Fernanda P.
Posted 7 months ago

The make-up for the scene looks really natural. I can imagine it took a long time to apply. Well done!

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

We just had an extraordinary makeup artist on our hands. Glad everyone is enjoying her work as much as we did!

Marnie D.
Posted 7 months ago

Great music selection. Great facial expressions with "Jack". It was eerie seeing "Jill" hiding in the background with her devious smile. Well done.

Fernanda P.
Posted 7 months ago

well done!

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

Thank you! :)

Brenda M.
Posted 7 months ago

I have a hard time with films where the lighting is so dim and you can't see what is going on. I realize it is meant to create suspense but I find it difficult to focus through.

Meagan H.
Posted 7 months ago

Thank you for voicing your concerns, Brenda. This is definitely something we will watch for in future missions and productions :)

Marnie D.
Posted 7 months ago

Very Impressive (:

Connor B.
Posted 7 months ago

The scene looks like it is just meant to be speechless and I think that shows lots of skill for this mission!

Tara S.
Posted 7 months ago

Nice audio mix. Super creepy - particularly the initial sound effects. Left me wanting more of the story.

Lisa L.
Posted 7 months ago

im still not sure what to make of this film after watching this scene, but i like the way it ends at least.

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