Dany Boy - Speechless

Emmy Kathryn D.
Posted 5 months ago

This is not bad but the storytelling wasn't that great and it also wasn't nearly as good as your trailer.

Jordan S.
Posted 5 months ago

I dont see any real emotion here. Its to descriptive and doesn't portray any real feeling. Definately dissapointing given you guys had a great original trailer.

Martin V.
Posted 6 months ago

The text at the beginning gave it away. I feel as if the speechless mission is supposed to demonstrate the skill of storytelling and emotional projection without the use of dialogue.

Rhonda B.
Posted 6 months ago

I enjoyed your trailer but I felt this fell short. I think your ideas are good but you did not display then here

Timothy W.
Posted 6 months ago

I don't feel like there's enough going on; there's no tension, no power, nothing moving here. It was pretty and sounded nice, but lacked substance.

Lukee W.
Posted 6 months ago

I myself, like many others, I see, liked the trailer feel you missed it on the speechless video. More intensity needed

Donald Y.
Posted 6 months ago

Very subtle. The musing makes up for the lack of speech. The story it tells is very sad without the explicit violence and death. It's a very good trailer.

Crystal D.
Posted 6 months ago

What happened. Your trailer was good but this feels and looks like a cop out. Nothing new and nothing exciting. Sorry to see this

AJ S.
Posted 6 months ago

There is. Owning powerful here. Though your trailer looked good this did not. Nothing new was done and o entertainment value

Jenny A.
Posted 6 months ago

The trailer interested me but this was a real disappointment. Nothing new here, just redo,s. sadly it lacked what ur trailer had

Sara S.
Posted 6 months ago

Sorry, but this seems a bit like an "easy way out" - start with text (if the scene were well executed, I wouldn't need context, but even more, most of this scene didn't involve any acting.

jane D.
Posted 6 months ago

i like it

Ange M.
Posted 6 months ago

Wow powerful scene, but would've liked to have seen more footage rather than having text on the screen.

R2 D.
Posted 6 months ago

Great use of your time and efforts, it looks like you were having a lot of fun with the epic-ness. Fabric is your forte!!!

Michel C.
Posted 6 months ago

This is a huge disappointment compared to your trailer that I felt had a chance. Sad that I feel you took the easy wad out on tjis

Joslyn P.
Posted 7 months ago

I was disappointed because there was nothing new, most missions had more exciting footage to keep us interested. I liked it but I thought the text defeated the purpose of it being speechless

Nancy G.
Posted 7 months ago

It could be considered a bit of a cheat to have text on screen and in fact it is not necessary: the good acting and action tell the story of a distraught woman. Beautiful colour palette. Lovely sari.

Joe Y.
Posted 7 months ago

I agree with some of the others that there isn't much new material here. Also, the. scrolling should probably be slowed down a bit

Nikki S.
Posted 7 months ago

Some nice shots - I love the image of the red sari falling onto the staircase. However, I think the choice to write out use written text was somewhat contrary to the nature of the mission.

Martha P.
Posted 7 months ago

Interesting, although I agree that writing the story was not the mission. Would like to see more. Good luck.

Knighten R.
Posted 7 months ago

Grim. Grim. Although, I feel like this should have contained new footage, I think I saw these shots in the trailer already.

Andy M.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm with some of the others here. The images are beautiful, but perhaps you missed an opportunity to show us something new.

luke k.
Posted 7 months ago

The make up and costume design were very well done. Looking forward to some knew material. Also think using writing takes away from the mission.

Bente H.
Posted 7 months ago

I think you could have used this mission to move your story forward a bit better.

Pawel L.
Posted 7 months ago

The music was well fitted to the scene but would've like to see something new and could've done without the writing

Nadia V.
Posted 7 months ago

Dwayne is right You have used what you had in your trailer and have not done anything different for this. I feel you let this one ride

Dwayne M.
Posted 7 months ago

I wish you had done something a little different here. This was already in your trailer and the text seems like a bit of a cop out.

Tammy B.
Posted 7 months ago

I think you missed the mark on this with no thought put in to it and using old scenes and I feel the scrolling text took away from the mission

Denise D.
Posted 7 months ago

Your point is so powerfully made without giving unnecessary details that totally overwhelm the viewer.

Aiden C.
Posted 7 months ago

I have to agree with other comments. The scrolling text is not needed for this scene. However I did not find this scene showed enough on why she was killing herself and her own struggle with this. Why not have some shots of photos of her and her lover. Why not some close-up of her have crying for hours etc. So much could have being done but wasn't to sell this scene.

Lori M.
Posted 7 months ago

I wasn't fond of the scrolling text. I really thought it took away from what could have been done with only the visuals. I would have preferred to have seen more of Nadia's anguish rather than the text. The flowing of the sari as it falls over the banister is chilling.

Tina B.
Posted 7 months ago

Way too brief and it was like cheating to have all the scrolling text. This project did not add anything.

Dalton P.
Posted 7 months ago

I would have to agree with some of the previous remarks, the text takes away from the video whic was well done, all could have been said i think with additional shots, the score relayed the seriousness of the situation for sure.

Paul H.
Posted 7 months ago

I would have liked to have seen more - especially since a lot of this we've seen already. Would like to get more of a sense of the characters after this tragedy.

Michelle E.
Posted 7 months ago

Striking use of the sari - that in itself said a lot, but the text felt tacked on. Would have liked to have seen that play out instead.

Justina P.
Posted 7 months ago

short and sweet. the limit is 90 seconds, but it was cool to see what u did in less time. less can be more

Michelle G.
Posted 7 months ago

wow that was really short. You're talented people but I wish that you had put a little more time into this mission - show us something new.

Adam O.
Posted 7 months ago

some very interesting shots in this. Love the artistry in the sari that looked like it was melting. Good job!

Pete M.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm sorry. I wanted to like this but it's a little too over-dramatic for my taste and it didn't tell a story with the visuals. Too much text.

Lauren M.
Posted 7 months ago

Musics really sad. Which is appropriate for the subject matter. Would have liked to see a bit more though.

John K.
Posted 7 months ago

just to echo the others I think using the text shows a lack of confidence that you can tell the story with visuals...

Artjom G.
Posted 7 months ago

Agree with Monique. Pics speak more.

Monique M.
Posted 7 months ago

i think there should be less text and more visuals. the sound did compliment the scene though, just needed a bit more

Matthew J.
Posted 7 months ago

Not a big fan of all of the text, would have liked to see more visual of what direction your film is headed.

Colin T.
Posted 7 months ago

not my favourite video of yours but i won't complain too much. would have liked to see a bit more than what you showed

Brent L.
Posted 7 months ago

Not sure that setting the scene with text was the right way to go. Also sad to see that credits took up a large part

Melissa C.
Posted 7 months ago

Dramatic scene...Would have liked to see a little bit more. I think I know where you were coming from though. Not wanting to show too much?

Siobhan W.
Posted 7 months ago

Enjoyed the sensual imagery and filming. Really hard to understand the story. Just not enough info, and the words moved too fast to read.

Su P.
Posted 7 months ago

Id like to see what is next for the movie as Im not sure where the plot is going. I really liked the trailer though.

Zolie G.
Posted 7 months ago

It's too bad that we've seen this in the trailer as well as in the Cheap Tricks mission. It just doesn't show enough of what you can do.

Shane T.
Posted 7 months ago

I like the issues you're dealing with here. Visual and interesting, but would have liked more story.

Afzal H.
Posted 7 months ago

We wanted to see a narrative snapshot from your film that showed off your vision & ability to tell a story using a camera and cuts, not text & definitely not reusing the visuals from the trailer. I really hope you guys up your game and deliver something special in your next mission to prove that you deserve a million dollars. Good luck!

Patti D.
Posted 7 months ago

Did she hang herself or not? The actress is beautiful and the camera work was fine I just don't know what happened in the scene.

Maryla N.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm pretty sure she hung herself. I think thats what the falling sari is supposed to suggest happened.

Patti D.
Posted 7 months ago

Artistically speaking... meh. Practically speaking there should have been a body attached to the sari or at least in the shot.

Lorette P.
Posted 7 months ago

this trailer was confusing. in the end did Nadia hang herself and was that a cemetery that we also saw. Quite confusing.

Lisa A.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm kind of confused by this. Isn't writing kind of cheating? some neat visuals but sorry this is not my fav.

Chris L.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm not even sure what to say about this. The credits at the end were unnecessary used to take up time? No comment on the rest

patricia s.
Posted 7 months ago

the music is great but there is something missing in the storyline. very disappointing

Meika A.
Posted 7 months ago

The music is great but there seems to be a disconnect re the storyline and I don't feel the concept or any intention was picked up here,,,too bad as I liked the trailer

Darren p.
Posted 7 months ago

I wasnt sure this told any more of the story or showed what was left to come. I hope to see more on the next mission as i really liked the first trailer.

Ronna W.
Posted 7 months ago

The shot of the sari tied to the railing was artistic and good, but the emotional impact on the audience could have been amplified by the use of more shots and slower transitions between shots.

Marianne M.
Posted 7 months ago

The initial image for this project drew me in but this mission didn't seem to succeed in its intent. Feels like there should have been more.

Cruella D.
Posted 7 months ago

We didn't need credits on screen for this mission. It seemed like a waste. The story needs to be sold with visuals. Good try but I think you missed the boat.

Aiden V.
Posted 7 months ago

Beautiful actors and clothing and the music was okay but the scene fell very short of expressing anything, no context, no feeling :o(

Brenda T.
Posted 7 months ago

Beautifully shot and the music was well chosen but seemed a little phoned in with the text rolling up.

Chris C.
Posted 7 months ago

The opening text crawl seems to violate the spirit of this mission. I will admit however, that without the text this would have been an incredibly confusing scene...

Very poorly done.

John W.
Posted 7 months ago

What can I say, I guess I am not alone in this one. I thought the film looked intriguing but this did not do it justice, and seemed to lack any effort, sorry

Hilda H.
Posted 7 months ago

I have to agree with everyone below, this was disappointing and did not leave me speechless either. Not sure what you were going for here

Patricia F.
Posted 7 months ago

Not fussy on this clip at all and felt it lacked imagination. I expected more after seeing the trailer.

jane D.
Posted 7 months ago

Wanted to see more of this

Paula D.
Posted 7 months ago

I thought it looked promising (after the script at the beginning) but it ended far too quickly to see the actual content.

Lisa R.
Posted 7 months ago

Not really a lot to go on to be SPEECHLESS about. I mean u could have picked a better clip i was not left speechless

Dana B.
Posted 7 months ago

The whole point of the mission was missed entirely!

Chris N.
Posted 7 months ago

you should have cut the explanation off the top.

Nellemarie H.
Posted 7 months ago

I am disappointed in the use of words to say something instead of images - kinda missed the point. And the sari shot was amazing the first time around, but the second time it loses it's effect.

Liam C.
Posted 7 months ago

Wanted to see more

Dawn F.
Posted 7 months ago

Very disappointed in this mission. Did not show anything new and no real imagination put in to this. I really expected more. Sad

Natalia N.
Posted 7 months ago

I agree. There was nothing new here and this was one of my fave projects.

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