Dark 4Rest - Speechless

Landyn I.
Posted 5 months ago

The music sets the tone and the visuals create the questions. The viewer must wonder what is going on. At least I do.

Luke M.
Posted 5 months ago

These girls are going to get a shit kicking and it's not going to be pretty! I feel they're going to be left a statistic.

Donald Y.
Posted 5 months ago

The music sets the tone and the visuals create the questions. The viewer must wonder what is going on. At least I do.

Bruiser F.
Posted 6 months ago

okay what is this really? I don't see this as a real mission at all. No one is moving or anthing? Did you put any thought in this

Genevieve H.
Posted 6 months ago

This is an interesting effect. But this is just a still image I think that you have panned across several times. I dont really understand what the point was?

jane D.
Posted 6 months ago

good luck guys

Mike S.
Posted 6 months ago

I think you need more than zooms, dolly and slow pans. Also it seems a bit dark and whites aren't white. Even at night snow reflects light. Can't tell what the thing on the ground is. A lost scarf?

Lauren A.
Posted 7 months ago

Seems like there wasn't anytime taken to edit more film but just take one shot and move it around the screen.

Hiro W.
Posted 7 months ago

Ominous but a little lacking.

Frank G.
Posted 7 months ago

I was looking for a lead and plot but did not see or feel it. What was the intension here pls? I see potential but much is missing

Afzal H.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm sure you guys wanted to show us a narrative snapshot from your film that shows off your vision and ability to tell a story using a camera and cuts but for some reason decided to do something totally different. What really inspired you guys to take this approach?

Donal O.
Posted 7 months ago

Please make something move other than the pan and scan. This movie has potential but this mission doesn't showcase it.

Sue M.
Posted 7 months ago

Not many clues here about what has happened though the music suggests something sinister. Why is nothing moving?

Oscar T.
Posted 7 months ago

Sorry guys I dont get this one either. Not sure where you are going with it or what the point ot plot is. Sorry

Farnsworth S.
Posted 7 months ago

What you making me watch? Looks like a picture with a zoomer going round. I dont' know what that hat is either.

Jody C.
Posted 7 months ago

Does the toque represent someone being taken or something more sinister? Music was applicable but yeah, it's not quite clear what happened here.

Ellen F.
Posted 7 months ago

Sorry...I don't get it.

Trevor S.
Posted 7 months ago

Not impressed. No idea what this about or what mood you are trying to create. You need more that a still photograph to make it here.

Natalia N.
Posted 7 months ago

Ah I'm sorry but I don't get it. The sound track seemed cool but I don't really understand what you were going for with just showing a still

Michelle G.
Posted 7 months ago

I have to agree with Carolyn on this one. I'm not sure why you didn't just shoot a scene. The soundtrack was good, but I would have liked to seen more of what you're capable of.

Carolyn K.
Posted 7 months ago

Ummmm....I'm left speechless. But not in a good way. I'm sorry :( You just confused me - I wanted to see how this mission helped your movie develop and grow.

Dave R.
Posted 7 months ago

I will never be able to look at an ownerless toque in Winnipeg the same. Are you sure this isn't a true story?

Lisa A.
Posted 7 months ago

I`m not sure why you chose to do a photo instead of video, but I`m not fond of the effect. Sorry but this one feels like it was phoned in.

Lynne M.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm sorry but don't get this at all, was just some eerie music and people standing in the woods, what was lying in the snow?

Mark V.
Posted 7 months ago

You missed the point. it's supposed to be a snipit of the movie with no significant dialogue. This was just a low quality (Looks about cell phone quality) snapshot of 2 people in a forest. we get it, Forest. please tell us more about the actual plot. I'm disappointed at this but I haven't given up on your team, keep trying.

patricia s.
Posted 7 months ago

could have done better with this guys

Diane N.
Posted 7 months ago

I was trying to figure out what that was on the snow, and only found out that it was a hat by reading one of the comments below. Adding a little more detail to this Speechless would help let us know what's going on.

Mike D.
Posted 7 months ago

This doesn't really say much; it's unclear what has happened. You could have done a lot more with this than is here.

Leslie H.
Posted 7 months ago

This looks like you took a still photograph and zoomed in and out on it. The character's don't move and the image is very grainy. I would like to have seen more from a group this far into the competition.

Fen N.
Posted 7 months ago

I think you could have done more with this, not your best mission but certainly not the worst I've seen

Amy Z.
Posted 7 months ago

The music really held this all together. I am very excited for this project, but felt like something more could of been done for this mission.

Jacquie G.
Posted 7 months ago

clever and strong I think you did a great job and score was fantastic jacquie Pretty Life

June B.
Posted 7 months ago

Music definitely supplies the creep factor. I've been loving this project and it pains me to say I think this mission lacks imagination and is poorly executed. Perhaps some fades between shots and/or flash inserts may have helped. Still following. Keep working hard!

Dougie M.
Posted 7 months ago

I'm left wanting to know more, I like the music but the camera work could use some improvement, different angles???

Maureen M.
Posted 7 months ago

Music makes it creepy!!! It's pretty simplistic and so it leaves a lot to the imagination, I would like to see more

Tammy B.
Posted 7 months ago

every parents nightmare

Candice M.
Posted 7 months ago

Then the hunt begins. To find the head that was once inside that hat. A long treacherous journey into the woods.

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